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Attention: Spoiler alert :D :D And if you are a die-hard Twilight fan, don't get mad at me I'm just stating my opinions *cough*

Last thursday, I finally finished Breaking Dawn, the 4th book of the Twilight series.... And you know what??? I don't understand why it is a best-seller... Here is why:

1. I think this one didn't leave me during the time I read the series... It says 'Hypnotic and dreamy prose' at the back of the covers.... HEH-LOH!!!???? Which part of the book is hypnotic and dreamy?? Sorry, but the woman's descriptions are too weak, and she uses the same words again and again!!! The characters do nothing but 'mutter', 'wince', 'cringe', 'roll their eyes' and 'grimace'.... Even at translation exam, I don't use the same word twice (and the exam is in spanish!)!!!! And she is graduated from literature department too!! She really should get a Thesaurus dictionary or she should read more...

2. The story is nothing special... Yeah, I know some people go like 'Omg!! It's a vampire novel!! Me loves vampires.....' etc... OK, I confess this isn't the lamest vampire novel ever (While the Vampire Kisses series exist, it can't be.. :D What kind of a lame author would name her book as 'Kissing Coffins' :o).. But in the first 3 book, the story is nothing but other vampires' stalking Bella... If there weren't the werewolfes (Sorry, the shape-shifters), the third book would definitely suck... Yeah, I love vampires too... But not Stephenie Meyer's... At first, the story seems very appealing but like I said after the 3rd book, you start getting tired of Bella and Edward's love... OK, I love Alice and Edward.. But with the 3rd book his relationship with Bella gets too tedious.. Hey, I get the point that you love her more than anything in this world, but there is no need to tell us this in each page... We're getting tired of the same ol' song!!!! At least, I am...

3. The ending is extremely disappointing... It's pretty obvious that Meyer's deadline was aproaching so she had to make up that crappy ending... But come to think of it, did she have the talent to create a story with mind-blowing ending all along?? After Alice and Jasper ran away, I expected that something big would happen in the end... Moreover Alice gave Bella this guy's adress and stuff... And I thought that this J person was some kind of powerful vampire that would bring the Volturi down... The USA Times says 'Move Over, Harry Potter' !!!! How dare they say such a thing?? Harry Potter books were like a pieces of a puzzle and at the end of the book JK Rowling didn't leave us with a temporary taste in our mouths... In Breaking Dawn there are many unanswered questions and the book itself doesn't really satisfy me.... Some best-seller...

But of course there were good points in the book too.... Since we don't have many gentlemen around us (to be honest, we have none), we really love Edward... Especially the part in which he proposed to Bella, I was like 'o.O Will someone say those words to me one day????????'... I think most of us think ourselves as Bella while reading the book :D Who wouldn't want a boyfriend/husband like Edward?? Haha :D And Rob Pattinson is a cutie :aww: But I must admit, in the book I love Jacob a bit more... He is definitely my type: arrogant, brash, nerve-wracking guy who is also funny :D And he has one more quality too: He loved Bella unconditionally... That little slut doesn't deserve those guys... And why, once she was turned into a vampire -or let me say she was done with Jacob-, she started being really really rude towards him... She even attacked him o.O That ungrateful bitch!!! I think Aro should have killed her the first time he glimpsed at her...

So the conclusion(Sorry, I'm getting bored, I will write no more): The book worths reading but in the summer, when you are deadly bored and no one is in town... So don't read it when you have exams or other stuff to do... And Stephenie should go to college once again... :D Sorry guys :D Love you guys Edward and Jacob Black (aka YAKUP KARA!!!) :D :D :D :D :D :D

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İki itiraz.

1) 30'uncu sayfadan öteye geçemedim zaten ilk kitapta; zira ömrümde bu kadar kötü yazılmış bir kitap görmedim. Karakter berbat, orospunun teki, onun gözünden görmek zorunda kalmak yeterince kötü, betimlemeler iğrenç ve liste uzuyor. Henüz bitiremediğimden dolayı, daha doğrusu okuduğumun iki saat civarındaki herhangi bir öğünümü midemde tutamadığımdan dolayı, bu 'hikaye' sözcüğüne hakareti, 'Twilight' denen yazılmayı;p kusulmuş garabetimsi 'fan fiction'ı daha derin eleştiremeyeceğim. Tek söyleyebileceğim şey, kimse kalkı;p da 'Ama Meyer kendisi için yazmış zaten' demesin - dünyanın en bariz ve en iğrenç Mary Sue'su ile giden ve 'vampir' sözcüğünü zerre anlayamamış iğrenç bir cümleler zincirine 'hikaye' ya da 'kitap' demeyeceğim. Bastırmayacaktı bu aşırı ilerlemiş cinsel fantaziyi Meyer orospusu.

2) Belki bende bir sakatlık var fakat Harry Potter serisinin 5'inci kitaptan sonra beş para etmediğini ve son kitabın serinin en kötü kitabı olduğunu düşünmekteyim. Hatta dürüst olmam gerekirse, ortalara doğru bir yüz sayfa beni oyaladı ve Dumbledore'un geçmişi biraz merak uyandırdı o kadar, haricinde kitaptan zerre zevk almadım ve 'temporary taste'in allahını yaşadım resmen. Bunun sebepleri arasında ise Rowling'in kendi yükselttiği çıtaya tekrar erişememiş olması ve korkağın teki olması mevcuttur zannımca.

Budur, haricinde sana 'My Immortal'ı okumanı tavsiye edip, 'Still better than Twilight' diyerek de abartıyorum ama söylediklerine (şimdilik gördüğüm kadarıyla) katıldığımı söylemek istiyorum. Yaklaşık üç paragrafta en az üç kere 'angelic' diye tekrar varsa ki geri kalanında da var anlaşılan, sıfatları şimdiden görebiliyorum... kusmaya gidiyorum ben Aslıcım, kendine iyi bakasın.
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~CrimsonStigmata2501 May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha..

1 hakkında 'Ben daha iyisini sooleyemezdim' demek istiorum.. Yani zaten kendisi icin yazmıs diyemez ztn, hani bazıları kendileri icin yazarlar ya da cizerler fln ama urettikleri sey harika bisidir... Bu yani cok kotu.. Kardesim daha ii yazardı yani.. Hatta bu hypnotic and dreamy kısmına laf ettiimde de gayet tartısmıstık kendisiyle :D Ama dooru simdi.. Ve ewt bas karakter cidden bir orospu yani... Ha ayrıca soolemeden gecemeyeceim, filmi seerettin mi bilmiorum ama oyuncuların cogunun rol kabiliyeti -1 ila 0 arasında seeretmekte.. Makyajlar da cok kotu, ozellikle Carlisle'ın... Offf of....

2) Aslında 7. kitapla ben de biraz hayal kırıklıı yasadım cunku esasen ben daha uzun bisiler bekliodum... Voldemort'un sekline semaline kavusması 4 kitap surdu ama adamın parcalarını birer birer bulup yokettiler 600 saifede... Bi de bazı mantık hataları vardı, bi kac yerde... Cık cık cık, JK yakısmıor bunlar sana.. Ama yine de seviorum yani... Ztn benim favori Harry Potter kitabım 4 :D Valla sen benden daha cok okuyan bi insan olduun icin de itiraz edemiyciim :D

Ya zaten o kelime tekrarları beni oldurdu yaa... Yani bari bi sozluk al kendine ya da oku biraz ne biliym... Ben bile iirenc ispanyolcamla, sınavda hikaye, masal bilmemne yazarken bi kelimeyi iki kere kullandım mı yuzum kızarıor yani, bi de kadın o kadar okulunu okumus bilmemne... Neticede gayet abartılan derecede bi kitap deil... Dur kusma bir nane ic diorum... Sende kendine ii bak hadi :D
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~darkfaerieannie May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I completely agree
I loved it at first, because i read twilight when it first cam out, and then... I found it si tedious
I didn't need Bella telling me time and time again just how good looking Edward is, and i didn't need Edward confessing his love for Bella in every other line.
I think that it could have been done so much better, and because of that, it was a let down, and Meyer's explanations leave much to be desired, and things aren't cleared up at all.
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~CrimsonStigmata2501 May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah... And have you noticed?? There are not many paragraphs in the book... It's mainly based on conversations... And it gets boring after a while... Cos their convos are nothing more than some teens' convos.. Same words, same expressions... But it has a positive point too... You read it quickly and finish it before you throw the book away :D Ah, and I've almost forgetten... The sentences are too short... They aren't sentences of someone who was graduated from literature department....
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~darkfaerieannie May 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh God, i know exactly what you mean!
I'm sorry, but the conversations i have with my friends are far more interesting >.<
I know! I mean for goodness sake, I'm an A Level English Lit. student, and I can write better sentances than that!
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~CrimsonStigmata2501 May 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes!! That's definitely what I mean... I mean I'm a mediocre Spanish Lit. student and even I can write better than her...
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you are right my dear... ok i am also a die-hard fan and i remember reading 50 pages of BD in the plane breathlessly =D, but there are a lot of unanswered questions and the books gets a little bit boring after a while..Nevertheless it's my favourite book from the series because you know, it's the last book and all =)
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~CrimsonStigmata2501 May 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Mine is probably Eclipse... :D I read it breathlessly too.. Because I was bored and wanted to read something else...
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arkadasim cok kotu yerden yere vurmusun twilight'i bunlar hic haz etmediim seyler :ninjastar:
saka saka.. =D off ya aslinda kadin dediin gibi edebiyat mezunu falan ama iste insan olesine yazinca bole oluo bence.. yani cok kasmamis kadin zaten kendisi de soluo ama iste twilight ya..bi de ben o zamanlar bole in search for something overwhelming onun icin bole edward ne zaman i love you dese ben bole icim sey ettiriodu :D
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~CrimsonStigmata2501 May 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ama bak ben de edebiat oorencisiyim ve oolesine bizi yazsam bu kitaptan 10 kat daa iisini yazarım ki daa once de senle konustuumuz gibi bu konuda kabilieyim 0 yani... Yani kadının kasmamıs olması bi excuse deil bence... Walla bak overwhelming bisi arıosan saha dediim seeleri oku :D Bak git o 3 katlı kitapcıya... Cennet orası cennet :D Walla Ed o kadar cok I love you dedi ki artık benim icim seyettirmemeye basladı bi sure soora... Iste bi o evlenme teklifi sırasında boole kendimi Bella'nın yerine koymustum fln... :D Ehuehuehue... Konusmustuk bunu da.. :D :D Bi de kadın 2 konu bulmus kendisine evirip cevirip onları kullanmıs yani... Cık cık cık... Walla entry'min basında da dediim gibi I'm just stating my opinions :D
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